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Eddieee
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Walked

I spent the hours picking through the moment
Waiting out the darkness
Walking through the fog
Searching for what I can't see
Bleeding words I no longer hear
One foot tromping past the other
Step within step
Wading deeply in furious confusion
Screaming past life and reason
Seeking nothing
I didn't say a word . . .

I just walked pasted

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I am really useless with poetry I am sorry (my high school teacher might not have recoverd yet and it's been 20 long years since I attempted to write a poem!), but it seems to me that you are writing about your experience with depression?

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Nice

Druid
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Mya wrote:
I am really useless with poetry I am sorry (my high school teacher might not have recoverd yet and it's been 20 long years since I attempted to write a poem!), but it seems to me that you are writing about your experience with depression?

While it was not the true focus of my words, your interpretation fits very well. Thank you Mya

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Neutra-The-SpaceWeaver wrote:
Nice

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