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Eddieee
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I am nothing but a poem,
A thing that you control.
A simple string of words,
I do not have a soul.

I am nothing but a poem,
Something to do your bidding.
Your demands from every verse,
Relentless and unforgiving.

I am nothing but a poem,
Words upon a page.
Screaming in all directions,
Smiling outwardly with rage.

I am nothing but a poem,
Desires arranged in clever ways.
My thoughts calling out to you,
In hopes that something stays

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My Words¬ ¬ I am nothing but a poem,¬ A thing that you control.¬ A simple string of words,¬ I do not have a soul.¬ ¬ I am nothing but a poem,¬ Something to do your bidding.¬ Your demands from every verse,¬ Relentless and unforgiving.¬ ¬ I am nothing but a poem,¬ Words upon a page.¬ Screaming in all directions,¬ Smiling outwardly with rage.¬ ¬ I am nothing but a poem,¬ Desires arranged in clever ways.¬ My thoughts calling out to you,¬ In hopes that something stays
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It's finally good to see a Post from you Eddieee - it's been a long time.
Gotta say, buddy, you're getting better as time goes.
Dayum good poem!
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💀B.A.1.💀 wrote:
It's finally good to see a Post from you Eddieee - it's been a long time.
Gotta say, buddy, you're getting better as time goes.
Dayum good poem!

Yes, too long
Thank you Al
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❤️❤️❤️
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It is good to hear from you again Eddieee. How are you?
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I like it .... Great to hear from you.
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Hey bugger! What happened to ringing my bell.😉

Lovely poem.
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Because I am poetically illiterate, can't comment on your poem, Eddieee.

But my 'ocd' went over the roof when I spotted a missing full stop at the end of your poem.. I hope it does have some kind of special meaning like that, otherwise I will not cope with it. ;)
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music=life wrote:
❤️❤️❤️

Thanks
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soco wrote:
It is good to hear from you again Eddieee. How are you?

All is well. Looks like Help is doing well also. Lots of new faces :)
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sophieshizuko wrote:
I like it .... Great to hear from you.

Thank you

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Evansent wrote:
Hey bugger! What happened to ringing my bell.😉

Lovely poem.

Hey Red! 😋

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Mya wrote:
Because I am poetically illiterate, can't comment on your poem, Eddieee.

But my 'ocd' went over the roof when I spotted a missing full stop at the end of your poem.. I hope it does have some kind of special meaning like that, otherwise I will not cope with it. ;)

Not to worry, I left out the period on purpose. The last line, "In hopes that something stays" is meant to be a lingering thought. It is not meant as an ending. :D

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Eddieee wrote:

Not to worry, I left out the period on purpose. The last line, "In hopes that something stays" is meant to be a lingering thought. It is not meant as an ending. :D

Phew, you made my day, Eddieee! ;) thanks..
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This is quite simply...beautiful.
Looking forward to reading more of your words.
Wow.
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**PamelaAnn** wrote:
This is quite simply...beautiful.
Looking forward to reading more of your words.
Wow.

Very kind of you

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