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Yorick
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trying to be poetic here but i dont even know what i just wrote

theres a door in front of me
its covered in colors i cannot see
whats past is beyond me
how i feel doesnt matter tho
troubles are in tense

although its always hard
truly lies the time
how whats real

with eyes sharper
than a spear.

if you think i will kneel
i'll die before the day comes

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You trying to turn into Eddieee Eddieee Eddieee now? No offense (to you or Eddie) but I just never really got poems. Hell I don't even get Shakespeare and his ****shit has survived over 500 years. Maybe it's me.

But I do have to say I'm glad someone is posting something. Maybe I should make a post about my crazy reality, that would start a firestorm that couldn't be put out with a tsunami.

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Kalinihta
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I have to say this, and I think some will agree. I like reading your poems NaCtHoMaN, and even though I'm not replying, I really enjoy them. there's really nothing to reply at such a post. but it's always a pleasure to read your poems, and they often make me think! thanks!

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I read also..

DocteurRalph wrote:

But I do have to say I'm glad someone is posting something. Maybe I should make a post about my crazy reality, that would start a firestorm that couldn't be put out with a tsunami.

And yeah, @DocteurRalph - we want that post, go on! ;D xx

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Yorick
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thanks guys...

@DocteurRalph heck yea do wreck some attempted poetry if you will. those last lines really hit the tune

Maybe I should make a post about my crazy reality,
that would start a firestorm that couldn't be put out with a tsunami.

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soco
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Perhaps you just need some soup.

Help me with:

We have another hurricane coming this way.

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